| Great Lake Swimmers – The Great Exhale Lyrics | 9 years ago |
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**At first I had one lyric change in mind but then saw many other mistakes. Please delete my multiple posts! I can't seem to find a delete button or l procedure.** I could be wrong but there are some adjustments I'd make to the lyrics. "Look at the names carved into rocks..." "Brushing my head and I feel their age..." "I'm coming home so leave the light on for me. Im drawing in on the luminous veil..." "Somebody's sleeping that you should not wake. Drifting whispers over damp clay." "Wide open spaces. In a sleep a long time (?) Punctuating places (?) Coming out like old teeth." "I'm soaring in on the great exhale." Also, the line "Certain grounds are water more likely" seems highly suspect. |
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| Great Lake Swimmers – The Great Exhale Lyrics | 9 years ago |
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"Somebody's sleeping that you should not wake" "Im coming home so leave the light on for me. Im drawing in on the luminous veil." "I'm soaring in on the great exhale" |
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| Great Lake Swimmers – The Great Exhale Lyrics | 9 years ago |
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I could be wrong but there are some adjustments I'd make to the lyrics. "Look at the names carved into rocks" "Brushing my head and I feel their age" "Drifting whispers over damp clay" |
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| Bob Dylan – Black Diamond Bay Lyrics | 10 years ago |
| Right on! Fantastic song. | |
| Andrew Bird – Masterfade Lyrics | 11 years ago |
| Interesting take on the song +1 | |
| Andrew Bird – Masterfade Lyrics | 11 years ago |
| Right on the money :) At least I think so. | |
| Guster – Happy Frappy Lyrics | 11 years ago |
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(Rephrasing the lyrics) Not much of life makes sense to me; it's too cold, uncaring and dry. But it does keep me moving forward surviving, even though sometimes I'm scared to take risks. Thinking of all the possibilities like where we came from, where am I going, who/what created this, if anything at all... it's endless. I sit alone outside hoping the answer will come from somewhere... anywhere(!) but the wind doesn't answer; it's just wind. Well backwards is one way I'll never be able to go. That part of my life, childhood/youth, is done. For now I'll try to "go with the flow" that which we call Life, and hope I don't drown. I hope I get what I think I want out of life. Hell, I'd be content with just staying afloat even if I don't have direction. I used to know these answers. Perhaps in my childhood. Perhaps even earlier than my very own existence. I try to rack my brain to scrape together those distant memories but life moves too fast and I don't have time to sit and ponder. Simple childhood happiness/contentment is now replaced with anxious worry - school, work, bills, fear, etc... all that comes with being an adult in this world. We now think that material things - house, car, gadgets, nice furniture, etc - will make us happy. So we struggle to gain these material things but none of them fulfill our hearts. (But in reality, it's more than enough because that which makes us happy & content is already within us. We just have to look inside instead of outside). |
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