Lyric discussion by tarzan05 

Yeah I love it- but fix these lyrics a little. Just a reading will show a few errors... "Not if you care 'for' me"

@tarzan05

What exactly do you mean is one error of several.

He sings precisely: Not if you really care for me.

Do you mean the 'for' isn't 'good' english? Then sing it 'good' more yourself, thereafter we can judge the goodness of your lyrics. Is the tarzan of the djungle of the langage brachiateing smart through the words unphotographable because of the ridiculousity as tarzoon, the shame of the djungle?

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