Thanks. All of your corrections seem right except for "And now I must have passage home. Your life's two veins from your heart." But I'm changing it anyway.
Thanks. All of your corrections seem right except for "And now I must have passage home. Your life's two veins from your heart." But I'm changing it anyway.
Should be: "This whole life ain't been any fun Now your viscera unfurls"
"And now I must have passage home Your life's two veins from your heart"
"You sublimate yourself, Granting us a wish"
"Good night to these wretched forms"
Thanks. All of your corrections seem right except for "And now I must have passage home. Your life's two veins from your heart." But I'm changing it anyway.
Thanks. All of your corrections seem right except for "And now I must have passage home. Your life's two veins from your heart." But I'm changing it anyway.
Yeah, that one does sound a little weird, but I have the record and that's what it says.
Yeah, that one does sound a little weird, but I have the record and that's what it says.