Lyric discussion by the_mime 

Darlin', darlin' Doesn't have a problem Lyin' to herself Cos her liquor's top shelf It's alarming, honestly, How charming she can be Fooling everyone Telling them she's having fun

She says, "You don't want to be like me, don't want to see all the things I've seen" I'm dyin', I'm dyin' She says, "You don't want to get this way, famous and dumb at an early age" Lyin', I'm lyin'

The boys, the girls, They all like Carmen She gives them butterflies Bats her cartoon eyes

She laughs like God Her mind's like a diamond Audiotune lies She's still shinin' Like lighting White lightning

Carmen, Carmen Staying up till morning Only 17 but she walks the streets so mean It's alarming truly How disarming you can be Eatin' soft ice cream Coney Island queen

She says, "You don't want to be like me, lookin' for fun, gettin' high for free" I'm dyin', I'm dyin' She says, "You don't want to get this way, street walk at night and a star by day" It's tirin', tirin'

The boys, the girls, They all like Carmen She gives them butterflies Bats her cartoon eyes

She laughs like God Her mind's like a diamond Audiotune lies She's still shinin' Like lighting White lightning

Baby's all dressed up with nowhere to go That's the little story of the girl you know Relying on the kindness of strangers Tying cherry knots Smiling, doing party favours Put your red dress on, put your lipstick on Sing your song, song, now the camera's on And you're alive again

The boys, the girls, They all like Carmen She gives them butterflies Bats her cartoon eyes

She laughs like God Her mind's like a diamond Audiotune lies She's still shinin' Like lighting White lightning

Darlin', Darlin' Doesn't have a problem Lyin' to herself Cos her liquor's top shelf

I believe it's "sing your swan song" not "sing your song song." Otherwise your corrections seem to be spot on!

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