"A trip to the Nile where I started swimming UP STREAM TILL I finally found the spring brimming"
"when it was over, their tails were wagging. FOR I taught them tricks"
Like I said, very minor, but I love this album so much that I want all the lyrics to be perfect =P
Great job with the lyrics! A few very minor, nit-picky corrections though. I capitalized them for clarity:
"A trip to the Nile where I started swimming UP STREAM TILL I finally found the spring brimming"
"when it was over, their tails were wagging. FOR I taught them tricks"
"And I lapped it seven times, which caused it to fall. It spilled out HER fortune, I found EXHORTATION"
Like I said, very minor, but I love this album so much that I want all the lyrics to be perfect =P