Okay so I'm definitely not sure if what I hear is what he actually says but I thiiiiink:
"Don't you ask me,
and don't you lose"
should actually be
"Don't you ask me,
don't you utter a word"
And:
"So paint your face up something elegant,
and this town maybe a darker shade of red"
should be
"So paint your face up something elegant,
and this time maybe a darker shade of red"
Like I said, I'm not sure but it's just a suggestion.
Okay so I'm definitely not sure if what I hear is what he actually says but I thiiiiink: "Don't you ask me, and don't you lose" should actually be "Don't you ask me, don't you utter a word"
And: "So paint your face up something elegant, and this town maybe a darker shade of red" should be "So paint your face up something elegant, and this time maybe a darker shade of red"
Like I said, I'm not sure but it's just a suggestion.