[slake] that thirst
a daunting [pulse] rate
blistered [toes] (as previously mentioned)
to my [wheel well] you're getting close
the tension [grows]
a [reverie] so silver quick
2nd verse - [accept] the rose
The first verse makes me think about mallwalkers. 60-somethings powerwalking through the mall in their sweatsuits, checking their pulses.
Some corrections:
[slake] that thirst a daunting [pulse] rate blistered [toes] (as previously mentioned) to my [wheel well] you're getting close the tension [grows] a [reverie] so silver quick 2nd verse - [accept] the rose
The first verse makes me think about mallwalkers. 60-somethings powerwalking through the mall in their sweatsuits, checking their pulses.